She ran around the counter picking up every bottle she saw taking a deep breath until each scent grabbed at her senses. There were flowers, fruits and herbs all mixed in a way that made her think of spring. Her wedding, which was just a few months away, was going to be in spring. Whenever she closed her eyes she could see herself standing there, feeling the soft fabric of her dress move against her legs as she made her way towards him. The look in his eyes would say everything and as she smiled back at him she would say a small prayer of thanks while pinching herself beneath her bouquet.
Just a year ago she was in and out of doctor’s offices trying to piece together what was happening to her and survive in spite of it. And he waited, patiently, protective and kind. The medication was tricky and she still wasn’t always quite herself but one thing that was constant was the feeling of triumph that she carried with her. She had done everything she could to find her way back to healthy and in the midst of that discovered she had been living her life half awake. Now when her eyes were open, she really saw what was in front of her and also what was possibly tucked just around the corner. It was so refreshing to move freely throughout the day with her imagination always at the ready instead of saving all of her dreaming for bedtime only.
As the salesgirl approached she smiled pointing at the fragrance she had just placed back on the counter and asked for two of them. She planned on keeping one in her purse and the other on her nightstand. That way whether she was picking up groceries at the market or tucking herself in for the night, she could remind herself that spring was always just within reach.
This post was for the writing challenge over at Trifecta. The rules are below (and should you want to give it a try, please do so!). I’d love to read your stuff
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1: to remain alive after the death of <he is survived by his wife>
2: to continue to exist or live after <survived the earthquake>
3: to continue to function or prosper despite : withstand <they survived many hardships>
- Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
- You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
- The word itself needs to be included in your response.
- You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
- Only one entry per writer.
- Trifecta is open to everyone!! Please join us.
The invincible summer lives within us always. Thank you for the inspiration and reminder in such a beautiful piece.
Thank you for the lovely comment.
Brilliant – this definitely deserved it’s accolades
Thanks for sharing!
Thank you! I was so excited about placing second especially with something that I really loved writing (and something that ended up painting exactly the picture I wanted). It doesn’t always work like that …
, sometimes no matter how hard I try.
Ahhh, I recognize this feeling.
This felt like a look into someone’s most sacred diary – the inner one they don’t know they have. Seeing myself was a welcome surprise – and I looked around where I’m sitting and realized, I have bees wax candles all over the house – the ones that smell like flowers – that I pick up often and smell.
Never thought about why, but having read what you wrote, I wouldn’t be surprised if my inner diary says something similar.
Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it. This blog is a lot like my diary. I pour my heart out here. It’s nice to know that people identify and connect with it. Makes me proud and happy.
Very nice story.
Duck!! Thank you
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A little peek at life’s complexities, but I think the spring-scented perfume speaks simply to us all.
Thank you, very much.
This is a sweet story (:
Thank you kindly (:
A very touching story! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you and thank you for reading!
This was beautiful, inspiring and so full of hope. I enjoyed reading your post.
Thank you so much!
Very nice! Very inspiring.
Thank you!
Oh, I do love this. Bring on the spring. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you! I started out just playing around with the prompt and ended up writing one of my favorite things actually. I love when stuff happens like that
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A great read-sweet scented with a “spring” in the step:-)
Thank you, very much!
I love the hope and excitement in this story. And I suspect, after reading your posts over the last year or so (maybe more?? I have no concept of time…) that at least some of this is real. I’m happy things are coming into balance for you. And really, spring isn’t that far away…it’s great if a scent can remind us of that
Thank you Janna and you are correct, there is quite a bit of truth mixed into those, I think, three hundred and nineteen words
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