I’ve tried a million ways to put my feelings into words as I sit mesmerized by the movement of your smile. Pages are not enough; I need the expanse of the evening sky.
This is my entry into Trifecta’s Weekend Writing Challenge.
“For this weekend’s challenge we’re asking you to include some hyperbole in your piece. It doesn’t have to be the whole piece, but it needs to be in there, and we’re looking for 33 words, as usual.”
Lovely!
I love this one. You do an amazing job of capturing a big feeling in 33 words.
Beautiful
“Mesmerized by the movement of your smile” – that’s such a beautiful line! I love this piece!
Very romantic – good hyperbole
This reminds me of someone’s special smile. Beautifully written.
So romantic-love this beauty:-)
Oh, sure that old “trump them with the expanse of the evening sky’ card again.
Nice piece!
This is a lovely hyperbole!
This is beautiful. You’re a world-class champion at these challenges…and that’s not hyperbole
Very nice!